Rearrange some sections and correct grammatical errors #1548

jonah · 2019-11-30T20:38:00Z

jonah commented

2019-11-30 20:38:00 +00:00

This PR corrects some sentences I didn't like, and rearranges the content of the website a bit.

Recommendations and worth mentioning products should generally go in the _includes/sections folder, while supplemental information (such as VPN criteria, news on E2EE, and other "further reading") should go directly on the page in /pages. This makes that guideline more consistently applied across the site.

This PR corrects some sentences I didn't like, and rearranges the content of the website a bit. Recommendations and worth mentioning products should generally go in the `_includes/sections` folder, while supplemental information (such as VPN criteria, news on E2EE, and other "further reading") should go directly on the page in `/pages`. This makes that guideline more consistently applied across the site.

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supplemental information (such as VPN criteria, news on E2EE, and other "further reading") should go directly on the page in /pages.

Due to how old.html is written, this PR leaves supplemental information out of the classic page

> supplemental information (such as VPN criteria, news on E2EE, and other "further reading") should go directly on the page in `/pages`. Due to how `old.html` is written, this PR leaves supplemental information out of the [classic page](https://deploy-preview-1548--privacytools-io.netlify.com/classic/)

_includes/sections/browser-addons.html

djoate (Migrated from github.com) commented

2019-11-30 22:27:37 +00:00

description="<strong>HTTPS Everywhere</strong> enables encryption of your connections to many major websites, making your browsing more secure. It is a collaboration between The Tor Project and the Electronic Frontier Foundation."

```suggestion description="<strong>HTTPS Everywhere</strong> enables encryption of your connections to many major websites, making your browsing more secure. It is a collaboration between The Tor Project and the Electronic Frontier Foundation." ```