Consistency and minor additions to details

- More parallel sentence structures, following <Name> <Verb phrase>
for the first sentence of cards. Related to issue #1420.
- Make Njalla parallel to the others, and mention Njalla
is based in Nevis with VPS in Sweden
- Don't use "us" when talking about external services
- Orange Website also provides domain registration
- Update capitalization and add more hyphens
- Mention that TOS;DR evaluations are done by the community and that
  they also evaluate privacy policies (see https://edit.tosdr.org/about)
- "E2EE encryption" is redundant since "E2EE" already has "encryption"
in it. Might as well expand it since full term is used later on.
- <Name> <Verb phrase> structure for Magic Wormhole
- For consistency, don't start Worth Mentioning entries with the name
- https://english.stackexchange.com/questions/27707/post-hyphenation-of-split-compound-words
- All the other "alert alert-warning" don't repeat the generic name and 
we also don't say 'a software'
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@ -106,7 +106,7 @@ ios="https://apps.apple.com/us/app/firefox-private-safe-browser/id989804926"
{% include cardv2.html
title="Onion Browser"
image="/assets/img/tools/onionbrowser.png"
description='Onion Browser is an open-source browser that lets you browse the web anonymously over the Tor network on iOS devices, and is endorsed by the Tor Project. Warning: there are certain anonymity related <a href="https://onionbrowser.com/#security-advisories">issues</a> with Onion Browser due to iOS limitations.'
description='Onion Browser is an open-source browser that lets you browse the web anonymously over the Tor network on iOS devices and is endorsed by the Tor Project. Warning: there are certain anonymity-related <a href="https://onionbrowser.com/#security-advisories">issues</a> with Onion Browser due to iOS limitations.'
website="https://onionbrowser.com/"
forum="https://forum.privacytools.io/t/discussion-onion-browser-browsers/1523"
github="https://github.com/OnionBrowser/OnionBrowser"